Essay # 3, Draft # 3
Homeless Shelter
Do you know how many poor people habit in New York City? Almost the 45% of the population and anybody help them. I know that you are considering two proposals to improve the city and help this kind of people. You must choose between building a homeless shelter and building a shopping mall. This is an important decision because in our city exist a big percent of needy people who need help also this will benefit the financial capital of the state. I completely sure that building a homeless shelter is beneficial for New York City because it will provide jobs, improve community, and provide safety for the homeless.
Building a homeless shelter is good for New York City because it will increase jobs. First of all, a homeless shelter can provide an opportunity to work for construction workers. In order to build the shelter, we will need to hire many different workers. We need carpenters, engineers, plumbers, electricians, and printers. Currently unemployment rate is very high. Hiring people to build the shelter is going to lower it. Secondly, there are some homeless who need help from social workers. After finish school social workers will have a chance to find employment working in shelters. Finally building a homeless shelter will help to give chance for doctors and nurses works. Homeless people need medical attention, so doctors and nurses could offer services. A homeless shelter is another place but doctors and nurses can get a job. A homeless shelter provides many different jobs.
A homeless shelter would be a good option for the city to improve the education. First of all, reading and writing skill can provide a conceivable future for homeless children. In order to have education skills, they will expected to be an important opportunity to make them success in the school due giving them free education. After their graduation from school they can find a job and stop been homeless. Secondly,, sex education can help homeless people; especially teenager how to take protection in their sexual life. The most popular mistake that teenagers do is having sex without protection because they didn’t have enough sexual education. These will prevent diseases such as Aids. Finally, financial education will teach them how to manage their money. Once they get out from the shelter homeless will be able to make financial decisions to manage they own bills for example paying rent. Homeless shelter can teach the homeless how to be prepared in the life out of the shelter.
To build a homeless shelter will lower the crime rate. First of all, should lower the drugs used. As we know, It is the most common problem on the New York streets. many people who used drugs are homeless, what the shelter will make is provide them something else to work on with and try to keep them busy for example working as cleaners in the shelter preventing the possibility to used drugs. Secondly a homeless shelter will decrease robberies. We know and see in the street that many on the criminal people are homeless teenagers who in order to survive, they learn to rob. Think in the wrong and dangerous way causes high percent of robberies; the homeless shelter is expected to help people to grow with right ideas in their minds such as, study and work hard about to be betters in life. Finally, the homeless shelter will lower murder. Homeless people are in risk to be killed because they don't have any place to sleep in or they are discriminated due smell so disgusting because they don't take a shower and building the shelter can offer safe places to live and decrease the murder rate. Crime rate has been considered for long time caused by homeless people and is time to help them and stop the crime rate, let's finished building the shelter.
In conclusion, Building the homeless shelter will benefit for the City because it will increase opportunities jobs, improve the education, and lower the crime.
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Exercises are good for your health. First of all your body will gain muscle. In order to gain health, you will see the change in your body. This means that when you start to do exercises you will feel stronger and will see the change in your body. You'll available to be more powerful and sexy with a good health, the increment in your stature, your muscle definitions, and feel good with yourself. Currently everybody worry about their appearance but didn’t care about their health. But you will able to make the chance, a great body healthy.
Secondly, a good way to improve your health is to increment your stamina. The best way to increment your stamina is do a lot exercises. As you know, the stamina doesn't come at night. I recommend exercises like: weight training, running briskly, swimming, trekking, and yoga. These exercises gives to your body a strongly resistance possible to be healthy. Also you body could produce more red cells than white to permit the combat with the impure of the blood. By exercising each and every muscle of the body gets tone up, and continues with increase in duration in sports, will surely improve the stamina tremendously. Special tips are to have banana, which is a good source of strength and a proper breathing, can help in a great way to increase your stamina and blood circulation.
Finally, the exercises bring you a lot benefits to your health. As we know, every exercise is consider good for health, due to the extended duration of the activity. One of the health benefits of exercise is the strengthening of muscles used in respiration. Your lungs need to be exercised as much as any other muscle group. Another health benefits is the strengthening of the heart muscle. This improves pumping efficiency and also lowers the heart rate. Also the most important benefit is an increase in red blood cells, which improves oxygenation in the body.
In conclusion, every single exercise with a proper breathing is good for you, due that you gain muscle and increase your resistance at the same time will bring big benefice in health.
Who are the most influential people in my life?
I have many people that could be my influences in life. Usually I pick family members, but in this case I want to change a little bit. I chose one person who is part of my family and people from the TV or musicians. Those persons have had a tremendous influence in my life and have taught me great things. Those persons are Henry my, cousin, Bam Margera, my favorite skater to follow, and the best one Lars Ulrich, my favorite drummer.
I picked my cousin Henry as my first influential person. He's that kind of person who helps everybody without wanting any gift in return. He's loyal and great son. That means is that he always is helping people as the best he can. He always is there for me. He helps me with my problems, feelings or when my mind is confused. He helps me due giving me advice, he said, “do not try drugs, always be loyal with old people, but especially be yourself, and you should never give up and always fight for that you want to have. This advice has been to me fighting for that I want to achieve. Also he shows me a way to see and follow this life by his examples. He most the time spend his time show me how the world is, and that thing that looks like gold, probably cannot be rights. I saw the big change in his life because I saw him get out from the shadows and grow up as person and be a person of light, not just for himself also for his parents, friends and especially for me. He was an evil angel that turn in a good angel. That is the reason why I feel so identified with my cousin Henry. He really helps me to be a better person, also the best cousin in my family.
Not only is my cousin an influence, so is Bam Margera my friends and I call him "the freakin' most excellent skater in the whole Element crew". I'm sure that Bam with his skating style, makes the young skaters go crazy. Then they try to do the awesome tricks that he does. Like, when he rides his board to be available to flip 360 degrees with a little cool rotation and finishing on a ramp, getting like four to five feet high with the enough time to do another excellent trick. Now I study his moves to performing my skills to improve my style skating like him. This influence me to be a pro skater, and to make my favorite tricks called, “varies kick flips and ollies.” Bam makes me feel so good and so excited about how he is with his parents. He always enjoys making jokes about his parents or fighting with them. When can I do that with my parents?; by watching his life on TV, give me a chance to see how to make my life interesting and entertainment at the same time. I like Bam's life style is so excited. I hope one especially day have a great family as him and do the great trick as well as he does.
Finally, my last and greatest influence is Lars Ulrich, the professional drummer from Metallica, one of my favorite rock bands. I definitely wish I could play drums like Lars and I hope to almost copy his style to play drums. For me, this guy is the best. When I saw him for first time, playing drums on videos, I just wanted to feel the music and the power of the drumsticks choking in a rhythmical and heavy rhythm that makes the strongest noise possible for enjoying the music. I remember well my first time seeing this band in a concert. It was so awesome, the best night in my whole life. That night was great because I saw Lars for first time playing his drums with faster moves and he makes that the people jump in a “cool” way called, mosh pit. That was really crazy, but awesome!; also that night was the birthday of Kirk Hammett, guitar player of the band. I'm waiting for their next concert here in NY at November. I'm so crazy about it, just waiting for the great day. Lars influenced me to start playing drums. I'm not so good, but I have his style and music in my mind and I am completely sure that I can play the drums like him or better. Currently, I practice it every time. I’m always practicing and imagining that I have a drums in front of me, when I walking, waiting for the train or the bus, and almost all the time in my house everywhere, but my especial place is on my bed. I just practice with the sticks in my bed because in my apartment doesn’t like noise. Also I like him because he has a good personality. As I saw in a video from YouTube, web site, when he was in Australia, he was running or doing exercises on the street then he stop for help an old girl to put their supermarket bags in the car. That shows me that he is so loyal and friendly with the people around him. He doesn't worry that the person watching him walking on the street. He’s so friendly with everybody. Lars influences me to start playing drums, and always be friendly.
In conclusion, I'm feel so happy to have excellent examples as influence for my. One of good ones was my cousin Henry. His teachings, was the best examples for my life because I saw it first hand. The other ones also show me great things and I wish be as them but for the most favorites that they be for me, anyone can show me that my cousins did.
